I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Soheilla, It is me Tory from Hornby Primary School. I like your poster about Mariana trench. I also like the information you have put on your poster. Maybe next time you could add more information to your introduction?
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This is my Information about the Mariana trench!
Hi Soheilla,
ReplyDeleteIt is me Tory from Hornby Primary School. I like your poster about Mariana trench. I also like the information you have put on your poster. Maybe next time you could add more information to your introduction?
hi Soheilla it's Nikau.I like your background you put on.how did you get all of these facts that is amazing.
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