I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi I'm Rye, I am in Room 7 at Hornby Primary School. I like the way that you explain how to do soccer. My favorite part was how to be a good player. I think you should put little more writing. What is your favorite sport and why do you like it ?
Hi Rye, next time i will put more writing. my favourite sport is soccer because... oh.. thats a hard question actually. hmm maybe because you get to team up and you have to kick the ball in the score thingy, i forgot what it's called. anyway maybe you could reply to my replay?
Hi Soheilla, It is me Tory from Hornby Primary School. I really like your slide show about Soccer. I like your information about soccer. Maybe you could add more information to your introduction?
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Hi I'm Rye, I am in Room 7 at Hornby Primary School. I like the way that you explain how to do soccer. My favorite part was how to be a good player. I think you should put little more writing. What is your favorite sport and why do you like it ?
ReplyDeleteHi Rye, next time i will put more writing. my favourite sport is soccer because... oh.. thats a hard question actually. hmm maybe because you get to team up and you have to kick the ball in the score thingy, i forgot what it's called. anyway maybe you could reply to my replay?
ReplyDeleteHi Soheilla,
ReplyDeleteIt is me Tory from Hornby Primary School. I really like your slide show about Soccer. I like your information about soccer. Maybe you could add more information to your introduction?