I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello! on Monday we did a slide about Mariana trench! I enjoyed this because it was a challenge to get information! My next step is to write more and longer facts!
Hi Soheilla, My name is Tory from Hornby Primary School. I like your slide show about Mariana Trench. I also like how you have added what you could improve on next time. Next time you could add more information to your Introduction?
Hi Soheilla - a fascinating topic to be studying! 3% is certainly a small amount - I guess it is very difficult conditions for us humans to be venturing too far beneath the surface. Interesting how different species evolve in varying circumstances. My guess to question one is that it is not a safe place to be going too far. There could be predators lurking, there bodies may also be designed for certain depth. These black smokers sound like the Brothers Volcanoes - essentially they are volcanoes underwater and shoot out very hot fluid containing chemicals - when the hot fluid reaches the cold water there is a chemical reaction. The life forms you speak of include minerals and are very valuable to our economy. Nice slide show - thank you.
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Hi Soheilla,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tory from Hornby Primary School. I like your slide show about Mariana Trench. I also like how you have added what you could improve on next time. Next time you could add more information to your Introduction?
Hi Tory, thanks for commenting! and i will add more information to my introduction.
DeleteHi Soheilla - a fascinating topic to be studying! 3% is certainly a small amount - I guess it is very difficult conditions for us humans to be venturing too far beneath the surface. Interesting how different species evolve in varying circumstances. My guess to question one is that it is not a safe place to be going too far. There could be predators lurking, there bodies may also be designed for certain depth. These black smokers sound like the Brothers Volcanoes - essentially they are volcanoes underwater and shoot out very hot fluid containing chemicals - when the hot fluid reaches the cold water there is a chemical reaction. The life forms you speak of include minerals and are very valuable to our economy. Nice slide show - thank you.
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