I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Soheilla, good work young lady.I noticed in the slide about computers that you mention they were small. They were NOT small they were very big and awkwardly shaped.Which meant that they were not portable.Some really cool pieces of information there. I would of loved to of seen a conclusion or an outro comment of some sort on your blog not so much the slide show. What do you think?Stay awesome and be kind.
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Hi Soheilla, good work young lady.I noticed in the slide about computers that you mention they were small. They were NOT small they were very big and awkwardly shaped.Which meant that they were not portable.Some really cool pieces of information there. I would of loved to of seen a conclusion or an outro comment of some sort on your blog not so much the slide show. What do you think?Stay awesome and be kind.
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