I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Soheilla, It is me Tory from Hornby Primary School here. I like your post about tidy drive. Your drive is nice and tidy. Maybe you could add more information to your intro. You could also reread your post to?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Soheilla,
ReplyDeleteIt is me Tory from Hornby Primary School here. I like your post about tidy drive. Your drive is nice and tidy. Maybe you could add more information to your intro. You could also reread your post to?